Me and my family went to the city to watch the firworks because it was new years day. When me and my family arrived at the city and had to walk to the spot to get the best veiw. The fireworks went off and it failed and everything exploded. The people that set off the fireworks were injured and the fire hat spread to dry grass and set off a big bush fire. The fire had hurt lots of people and had to be rushed to the hospital right away.
Elijah,
How dreadful that a moment for such joy, enjoyment, and celebration went so terribly wrong. Your piece reminds us that anything can happen in a split second. How wonderful that there are people in this world who stand at the ready to help others in need—like the hospital workers prepared to treat the victims of the explosions in your piece.
Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
Hello! What a disaster that fireworks display turned into! I suppose that is why there has to be such strict safety rules in place. Occasionally in Australia some of our displays have been cancelled because they think it is too dangerous because of the weather and bushfires that are already raging. Well done.